Television dominates the free-time for too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socializing with others. Do you agree or disagree? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Nowadays

television

has become very important for most of the

people

Television

is one of the most attractive scientific technology for

people

, many

people

have

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abit of watching only

television

in their spare

time

Although

people

have lots of work to do in their free

time

but

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due to dramas and programs

people

ignore their other activities. I

am agree

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with

this

statement and I will share my views related to

this

. Most of the

people

includes

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watching

television

in their hobby, they think that it is useful for them. Undoubtedly

television

is good for entertainment, but it necessary to watch it within a limit. Most of the

people

watch

television

in front of their children, so definitely children

also

want it to watch and because of

this

they cannot concentrate on their studies properly. On another hand, watching

television

have lots of negative effects on our social lives.

For example

, a family having lunch or dinner together and all are watching

television

, so at that

time

it is good to discuss or share their thoughts rather than watching

television

because they should realize

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that it is

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ery important moment for them.

Furthermore

, most of the

people

are busy due to job and after coming back to

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ome they are habitual of watching

television

, they not give

time

to their family and

also

avoid to meet their friends and relatives.

Moreover

, if there is

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eekend or holiday

people

at that

time

like to stay at home and not have

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nterest to socialize with their friends, due to which relationships gets weak. Many of the

people

have awareness about the negative impact of

the

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watching

television

on our health. It

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effects

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affects

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our eyes, mind and body. Many doctors

says

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that, watching too much

television

can

effect

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on our cardiovascular system and

people

those are habitual for sitting in front of

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elevision for

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onger

time

can

also

gain weight and due to

this

the have to suffer

with

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the problems that

occurs

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due to obesity. In conclusion,

people

should have to adapt activities that are good for their health and whenever possible it is good to socialize with friends and relatives. Watching

television

will only make

people

inactive and will develop

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ack of interest in other useful activities

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