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Television dominates the free-time for too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socializing with others. Do you agree or disagree? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Nowadays
television
 has become very important for most of the
people
.
Television
 is one of the most attractive scientific technology for
people
, many
people
 have
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abit of watching only
television
 in their spare
time
.
Although
,
people
 have lots of work to do in their free
time
but
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due to dramas and programs
people
 ignore their other activities. I
am agree
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 with
this
 statement and I will share my views related to
this
. Most of the
people
includes
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 watching
television
 in their hobby, they think that it is useful for them. Undoubtedly
television
 is good for entertainment, but it necessary to watch it within a limit. Most of the
people
 watch
television
 in front of their children, so definitely children
also
 want it to watch and because of
this
 they cannot concentrate on their studies properly. On another hand, watching
television
 have lots of negative effects on our social lives.
For example
, a family having lunch or dinner together and all are watching
television
, so at that
time
 it is good to discuss or share their thoughts rather than watching
television
 because they should realize
it
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 that it is
v
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ery important moment for them.
Furthermore
, most of the
people
 are busy due to job and after coming back to
h
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the
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ome they are habitual of watching
television
, they not give
time
 to their family and
also
 avoid to meet their friends and relatives.
Moreover
, if there is
w
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eekend or holiday
people
 at that
time
 like to stay at home and not have
i
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nterest to socialize with their friends, due to which relationships gets weak. Many of the
people
 have awareness about the negative impact of
the
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watching
television
 on our health. It
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effects
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affects
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 our eyes, mind and body. Many doctors
says
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say
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 that, watching too much
television
 can
effect
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affect
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 on our cardiovascular system and
people
 those are habitual for sitting in front of
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the
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elevision for
l
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onger
time
 can
also
 gain weight and due to
this
 the have to suffer
with
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 the problems that
occurs
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 due to obesity. In conclusion,
people
 should have to adapt activities that are good for their health and whenever possible it is good to socialize with friends and relatives. Watching
television
 will only make
people
 inactive and will develop
l
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ack of interest in other useful activities
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