the traditional that the family gets together to eats meal is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts?

Over the past few years, there are families who are forgetting the
traditional
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tradition
of the meeting of the whole
familys’
a social unit living together
family
families
members in the meals. We will find out some reasons why
this
happened and the consequence of
this
problem. The main cause of
this
problem is the children who eat in front of
TV
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the TV
. In the modern life, when the industry is in stage of 4.0, following the development of technology. The children have an interest with programmes in the
TV
such
as cartoon movies,
TV
shows for kids or so on. It is not only that, but
also
they live in a single-parent household what a thing nobody wishes for.
Moreover
, the more the world grows, the more the people work hard.
Therefore
,
this
issue leads to
kids’ parents
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the kids’ parents
are careless in taking care of
childrens’
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children’s
children
child’s
Childrens’
meals or they have no time to teach them how the way of correct
eat
the thing named or in question
it
. The effect of
these
denotes a person or thing
this
has been and will continue to be very serious.
Firstly
, it is not good for their health as making them becomes kids’ weakness and to be difficult against diseases. The
second
, the younger people eat in front of
TV
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the TV
a TV
that influence the form of the
childrens’
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child’s
children
children’s
personality and when they mature in
this
condition, the
next
generation will
also
be impacted. The truth is, the meals of the family will be not important and break the traditional which was maintained in thousands of years. In conclusion, these
is
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are
obviously
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obvious
reasons that have a particularly negative effect
to
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of
on
a close-knit family so the people must pay attention to their family more to prevent unhappiness.
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