It is general believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not.However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions

Natural talent,
such
as sports or
music
is thought that children can be trained to be good at sports or
music
. While it is true
for
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to
some extent, I think that learning
music
or sports is able to depend on the potential of each child. Obviously, to become the good sports or
music
performers possibly depends on favourite and training method.About the
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
, children would learn or practice about sports or
music
regularly, if they are very keen on performing
music
or sports. Despite getting failure, they may not feel stressful during
learning period
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the learning period
a learning period
. Plus, they
also
have the motivation to improve their skills as well as enrich their
knownledge
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
about their sections
,
Accept space
,
especially sports or
music
.
Moreover
, optimal methods
also
play the crucial role in educating children to become the talented sports people or musicians.
it
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It
means that the trainers are straightforward to find their
students's
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students'
student's
weaknesses or
strenghts
the property of being physically or mentally strong
strengths
.
Furthermore
, they can give the useful pieces of
adives
a proposal for an appropriate course of action
advice
for each
students
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student
to make their
students's
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students'
talent improved.
Additionally
, young people are able to feel enthusiastic about learning sports or
music
by the optimal training programs. On the other aspect, young people who have potential about sports or
music
are
piece
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pieces
of cake to be good sports players or musicians.
For example
, as Tran Duc Vien
,,
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,
the one of
most well
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the most well
-
reputated
people in entertainment, said that it will be challenging for young people who are very keen on working
at
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in
entertainment
such
as musicians or
artitsts
a person whose creative work shows sensitivity and imagination
artists
to be successful without potentials. It shows the truth that sports or
music
require
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requires
children to have the qualities and potential to learn how to perform them professionally and might be the challenge for children to learn. In conclusion,
although
children having
hobby
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a hobby
hobbies
about sports or musics can become successful performers, the potential is
also
the factor of being good sport players or musicians. I strongly agree that children are able to be trained to perform sports or
music
well.

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