Some people think that the best way to ensure road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

On the one hand,
refers to the speaker or writer
agree that it is a good idea to increase
minimum legal age
the minimum legal age
for driving cars or riding motorbikes.
, young people are less mature and less responsible with their manners, so they might not be aware of the importance of
about to be mentioned or specified
, increasing minimum legal age can decrease traffic accidents and prevent them from breaking the laws.
, young people
can not
control exactly their vehicle when they meet a dangerous situation
For example
, the car speeds out of control because the accelerator
don’t working
is not working
isn’t working
, the older people clam down and they change gears in low gear combine
hit break but the young people
do not
have more experience so
an unfortunate mishap; especially one causing damage or injury
soon occur
soon occurs
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation


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Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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