Some people believe that studying abroad is important because it expands a person's knowledge and understanding of the world. Others feel that it is better to study at home because that is the best way to prepare for a career in the student's own country. Discuss both these views, and give your opinion.

Some students prefer to
study
abroad because it offers them with
wide
Suggestion
wider
opportunities and exposure to the outer world. Others prefer to
study
in their
home
country
to be able to fall in line with the career demands in the
home
country
.
This
essay will discuss why studying in
home
country
has its
benefits but
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benefits, but
why studying abroad is more beneficial in terms of exposure. Students who prefer to
study
at
home
do so to prepare themselves to find jobs in their
home
country
. They believe that studying at
home
will allow them to fall in line with the market demands of that particular
country
.
In addition
, studying at
home
is convenient and cost effective.
Therefore
, many students prefer to
study
in the
home
country
.
Although
, studying at
home
is convenient and less expensive, but studying abroad has its own advantages.
First
, it allows students to expand their knowledge of
outer world
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the outer world
. Students learn about different cultures and economies of the outer world.
Second
, it allows them to come out of their comfort zone and make independent decisions.
Finally
, it helps them to explore
wide range
Suggestion
a wide range
of jobs and opportunities which may or may not be present in the
home
country
.
Therefore
, studying abroad is a
populat
regarded with great favor, approval, or affection especially by the general public
popular
option opted by many students. Students prefer to
study
at
home
because of
convenience but
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convenience, but
studying
abraod
to or in a foreign country
abroad
offers wider exposure to help students grow.
This
essay discussed why some students prefer to
study
at
home but
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home, but
why studying abroad is more advantageous for the students.
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