Environmental problems are serious in many countries. It means that the only possible way to protect the environment is at international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

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More and more countries all around the world are facing drastic environmental problems. In my

opinion I

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opinion, I

believe that the protection of the environment not on lies at the macro

level

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but should be an individual

level

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too. It is a fact that we cannot deny the role that governments and organisations play to protect the green of our world.

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, at a macro

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level it

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level, it

is the government who spends on resources to diminish the

pollution

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world-wide which an individual

can not

cannot

afford.

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, governmental bodies from all around the world decide and conduct meetings in order to impose laws on certain pollutions.

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, governments all over agree to fine taxes on the industries for releasing harmful exhausts or wastes

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into

the atmosphere or water bodies so

consequently

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air and water

pollution

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could be minimised.

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, considering everything at the international

level

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, individuals themselves should not forget to play their part and spread the trend surrounding them to get our environment

pollution

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free.

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for example

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, if a person turns off the lights when unnecessarily used can save us a little energy, and believing every person making

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small effort would help us to a greater extent.

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, if customers stop buying plastic packaged food, stores and supermarkets will consider using other form of

packaging which

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packaging, which

could be renewed and do not add to causing more

pollution

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. In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is not only the

governments

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government's

duty but

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duty, but

individuals

also

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play an important role to protect the environment as a whole. By acting as soon as possible, we can secure the future for our

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generation.

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