Some people say that in the modern world it is very difficult for people to have a healthy lifestyle. Others, however, say that it is easy for people to be healthy and fit if they want to be. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, people have different views about how modern lifestyles
is
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are
. Some people believe that having a healthy style is really hard in
this
developing society. Meanwhile, others find it easy to have a good way of living. In my opinion, it cannot be denied that modern
life
causes many health problems and leads human to an unhealthy style.
However
, people need to aware the importance of having a healthy lifestyle and follow
this
model of
life
. Due to the rapid changes of
world
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the world
, the speed of
life
has become faster and faster. People always try to do everything as quickly as possible and they always have to face with competition. They mostly have no
time
to concern other things except their works.
As a result
, fast food is the
first
choice for their daily eating.
Other
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Another
reason why people cannot live a healthy
life
is the development of technology. Because of these
technology
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technologies
, people
are not required
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do not require
a lot of motion. They spend most of
time
sitting down in front of computer at workplace or in the car that causes many poor health problems
On the other hand
, a group of people believe that there are several ways to be healthy and keep fit in
this
busy society. Thanks to the improvement of technology, there are many available information about what people should eat. It
also help
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also helps
has also helped
people access to clean and healthy food stores which are very convenient. In additions, people can take just
half hour
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a half hour
per day to prepare their all day meals because healthy food is very easy to cook and saves
time
.
Besides
, people
also
can spend one or half hour a day to do exercise. It really does not take much
time
. I think that the
first
two outweigh the
second
view. I mainly agree that human need to live a healthier
life
because without a good health, people even cannot do anything. It is not hard to break
bad habit
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bad habits
a bad habit
if they have
strong mind
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a strong mind
to make a change In conclusion, having a healthy way of living or not is not difficult and it depends on each person’s
choices
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choice
.
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