Some people think competitive sports are important for a child’s education. Others think it has negative effects on children.Give your opinion!

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opinions
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the role
of sports
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to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
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competitive sports in child’s school curriculum
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while others oppose to have a view that it could impact
child’s development
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a child’s development
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essay will discuss both viewpoints and will express that why it is beneficial to expose children to competitive sporting activities and how
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the negative impact
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can be avoided.
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meaning to the child’s understanding is changing dynamically. Other than theory related to science
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literature
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mathematics it’s
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more about how a child’s develop his social know-how. Cognitive skills can only be developed when one’s mind is active and fresh.
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competitive sports can truly be a boom in activating brain cells and adding a Learning dimension in child’s education period.
For instance
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children who are more participative in individual sports like tennis
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athletics
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swimming or badminton
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according to
Boston university survey
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a Boston university survey
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have shown
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has shown
better
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good
results in studies as compared to the one’s who did not participate in any sports.
In addition
to
this
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it lends a helping hand in
child’s career
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a child’s career
the child’s career
in a way they can relate practicality or sports in easy and effective learning.
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on the contrary
same people think
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the competitive nature of sports can put negative pressure on
child’s development
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the child’s development
a child’s development
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aspect should
also
be pondered upon, as every child is unique and may excel in different subjects or can have inclination towards
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the arts
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But
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physical activeness is equally essential and child’s energy can be channelised in a right way if there is correct mentoring
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Only is one will balance time in sports and studies a child can have a complete education. To conclude
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different sports
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stimulate to grow can be produced.

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