You Are a Student at An English Language School and Are Living Leave a Comment / GENERAL WRITING TASK 1 / By IELTS FEVER / 22/08/2024 / 2 minutes of reading You Are a Student at An English Language School and Are Living in Private Accommodation with Other Students from The School. You Have Not Had Hot Water or Heating for Some Time. The landlord’s Workmen Have Tried to Fix the Problem but Without Success. Write a Letter to The Landlord. In your Letter: State Your Reason for Writing. Describe the Problems. Propose a Solution.
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Dear Sir/Madam
I am Mayank, one of your tenants. I have been living in flat no. 113 for the past two years
as well
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I am writing to express my extreme dissatisfaction with your service regarding a hot Correct word choice
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water
and heater problem.
Last
week, I wrote to you the same thing: Hot water
is sometimes not available for bathing or other domestic work. Your workers tried to fix this
problem, but couldn’t. We are all management study students who have been living at your accommodation, and we have to arrive on time in proper uniform. At the time of bathing, if hot water
is not available in the morning, you should tell us how we get ready for school. Moreover
, I checked the heater, and it is too old and has a life span of over. It’s all heating coils are rusted, and the wire’s thimbles are broken.
In the end, I suggest you please arrange a new one. I know some specialists in water
heaters, so I will call them to repair it. Once I pay the repair cost, I will deduct it from next month’s rent.
I hope you will look into this
matter urgently.
Yours sincerelySubmitted by S.hasanfadavi on
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Ensure all equipment details and their issues are clearly described.
coherence cohesion
Maintain a clear logical structure with one main idea per paragraph.
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Clearly stated the problem and dissatisfaction.
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Provided a plausible solution along with an offer to handle the repair costs.
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Used a polite and suitable tone throughout the letter.
coherence cohesion
The letter follows a coherent structure with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.
coherence cohesion
Proper use of greeting and closing.