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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#people #health #future
Recently, there have been a lot of discussions about
health
 and whether it is going to improve or not. In my opinion, I think that people will become unhealthier in the
future
 than they are now. There are many reasons that support the idea of people becoming unhealthy in the
future
.
Firstly
, one reason is that of
food
. People tend to eat more fast
food
 nowadays. They tend to treat themselves with sweets and chocolate whenever they want.
This
 appears to be because people are busier now than they used to be. So, people don’t have a chance to cook or even learn the art of cookery.
Also
, having a lot of unhealthy
food
 can lead to obesity and it could be a serious issue in the
future
. Another reason is that
technology
 is developing everyday. Young people enjoy buying new gadgets and the latest devices.
This
 has a negative impact on their
health
, especially when they enjoy video games. Spending long hours looking at a screen can lead to bad eyesight and obesity as well. Yet another reason is that laziness is a big issue. Different forms of
exercise
 might disappear in the
future
 because people don’t like sports.
Also
, people prefer spending most of their time on the internet and the internet is growing every single day. Other people might disagree and say that
health
 will improve in the
future
. They believe that new sports and new ways to
exercise
 will appear in the
future
.
However
, I don’t think it can happen
since
Suggestion
for
 the majority of people spend less time outdoors.
Moreover
, other people believe that
technology
 will try and help people improve their
health
.
For example
, there have been some games released on the Wii console that makes people
exercise but
Accept comma addition
exercise, but
technology
 is developing more in a negative way.
For instance
, many phone industries are developing new applications
everyday
Suggestion
every day
 and today’s generation likes to follow every trend.
This
 prevents people to go outside to
exercise
. They like to spend more time on the internet downloading new programmes or reading
gossips
Suggestion
gossip
 about
celebraties
a widely known person
celebrities
.
This
 affects people’s
health
 badly. In conclusion, I believe that people’s
health
 is affected negatively by fast
food
,
technology
 and sports and it will be a problem in the
future
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • 1. Standard of health
  • 2. Average
  • 3. Lower
  • 4. Future
  • 5. Aging population
  • 6. Chronic diseases
  • 7. Sedentary lifestyle
  • 8. Lack of exercise
  • 9. Poor dietary habits
  • 10. Environmental pollution
  • 11. Technological advancements
  • 12. Impact on health
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