In many countries, schoolchildren are required to wear school uniforms. Do you think this should this be enforced in all schools?

There have been a plethora of arguments regarding the unification of uniform in schools. While the consensus is it has beneficial aspects of students’ morale, some experts opt for giving the pupils their freedom of choice. I think it should be enforced to wear the same uniform. On the one hand, some scholars consider freedom of choice as a value that must be implemented within youngsters, on top of that, some children would prefer to present their identity through their clothing.
a
Suggestion
A
prominent reason for
this
is the eagerness of teenagers to stand out among the crowd.
For instance
, in recent research scrutinized the statistics of 104 schools in London
Last
year, and the results have put forward the hypothesis that 8% of students felt better about “casual Thursday”, which will be inducing better
education
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educational
atmosphere in the foreseeable future.
Therefore
, it might be a good idea to ban schools from forcing a specific style.
However
, the percentage of them is small enough to be ignored and to consider the reasons
On the other hand
, for a myriad of reasons the income level of the students’ families can vary,
moreover
, their ability to purchase exorbitant clothes for their offspring can be a hardship for them. One particularly salient example of
this
is a research paper of the University of Cambridge that surveyed middle-class adolescences in high schools, which implied that they felt less than their peers when it comes to comparing their clothes during summer camps.
Hence
it is crucial to maintaining the morale within the campus by removing any signs of privilege.
Although
some would argue it should be the principal decision, they admitted that they made a blatant mistake by not considering the implication of
such
sole-opinion, which they made erring on the side of caution Due to the aforementioned reasons, I am a staunch supporter of enforcing a unified uniform. While some pedagogical consider
this
enforcing insurmountable, I believe the government should ease
this
decision.
Submitted by Serhio Baraniuk on

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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