Today people are traveling more than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of traveling for the traveler?

In
this
ages
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age
, society
tend
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tends
to do more travelling considered the
past
(superlative of 'good') having the most positive qualities
best
time. Now,
this
activities
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activity
have been the famous daily need for the certain people. Remembering that activities
has
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have
many benefits.
First
of all, people do more travelling than ever before, especially
for
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in
this
era because the vehicles which supported
this activities
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these activities
this activity
. Be more specifics, remembering
than
objective case of they
them
in the past, society who did travelling by just one kind of vehicles
such
a ship and of course it will consumes a lot of time for that. But today, there
is
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are
so plenty of sort vehicles that can make easier to do travelling. Taking the plane
for example
,
this
vehicles
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vehicle
was supported
by rocket engine
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by a rocket engine
which can go through to somewhere just a few of minutes and the prices is adorable. So, the travelling will not
felt
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feel
boring
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bored
.
As a result
, many people
do more travelling just purchase
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have more travelling just purchased
are more travelling just purchasing
do more travelling just purchase
the ticket with reasonable price and they can go anywhere what they want.
However
, travelling has benefits for
inhabitants
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the inhabitants
who did it. According to some people who ever did the travelling, that the travelling can make be more independent. The main reason for
this
is because when people going to somewhere, they must manage and operate their self and financial professionally.
For example
, when they want to have kind of food, they must choose which one the cheaper
,
Accept space
,
if not it can make their financial broke directly. Another reason, when they want to stay for a several days, they should
looking
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look
for the
comfortable
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comfort
and reasonable place to take a rest.
As a result
, they can be more independent because they already know how to self-manage from travelling. To conclude, people do more travelling in
this
era
a particular geographical region of indefinite boundary (usually serving some special purpose or distinguished by its people or culture or geography)
area
is because
the easy
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the ease
the easiness
of
life
Accept comma addition
life, such
such
many vehicles can
used
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use
, and the travelling has a many benefits and can make our brain fresh.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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