Today's weddings are becoming bigger and expensive than it used to be in the past. Why is this happening? Is it positive or negative development?

Wedding ceremonies, nowadays, include large amounts of
money
and a considerable number of people as compared to the past. Peoples' habit of showing off, in my view, is one of the major reasons behind
this
trend. The aim of
this
essay is to explain why the phenomenon of over-budgeted and bigger
marriage
functions do more harm than good. The prime reason for spending large amounts of
money
and inviting many people in marriages is showing off.
This
is because
significant number
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a significant number
of people believe that they would get admiration in society if bragged about wealth by overspending on
such
functions. In
Punjab
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the Punjab
,
for instance
, people prefer to rent
marriage
palaces, which are generally expensive,
instead
of making arrangements for weddings at homes. What is more, the larger the number of people is expected to come, larger the arrangement for food and seating will be.
Thus
, to make
marriage
functions bigger, sending invitations to all the contacts is not a wise idea, as it
further
increases the overall budget. The trend of bigger and expensive
marriage
ceremonies, in my opinion, is a negative development.
People
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A people
belonging to middle class families might feel inferior than wealthy ones because of their inability to spend large amounts of
money
on marriages.
As a result
, they prefer taking out loans for those functions and spend many years
to pay
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paying
them off. Another point is, the
money which
Accept comma addition
money, which
is wasted on weddings can be well saved for other purposes,
such
as charity to schools and orphanages. In
this
way, people will not only contribute to a noble cause but will
also
experience a sense of satisfaction
in
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with
them by helping the needy ones.
Therefore
, it is better to have smaller and less budgeted weddings. In conclusion, while people try to brag about their wealth and contacts, I believe that it is of no use as it may develop a sense of inferiority amongst poor people.
Besides
this
, if people do charity with that
money
, the world will become a better place for those who really needs it.
Submitted by manpreetdubey on

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