Some people think that we live in a society where money and possessions are given too much importance. Others believe that his is improving our lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

There is one segment of the population that believes that we live in a world where
is given too much importance;
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others, however
, believe that
is essential in up scaling people’s lifestyle.
essay will discuss both points of views and at the
end I
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end, I
will give my own perspective on the matter. On one hand, people who believe that
is being given too much importance argue that
manner of acting or controlling yourself
directly relates to inequitable distribution of wealth. People focus on earning more than their needs and end up buying possessions that are very expensive
as cars, expensive
an adornment (as a bracelet or ring or necklace) made of precious metals and set with gems (or imitation gems)
and watches and so on. Because of
rich segment of the society becomes richer and poor people
so poor that they end up dying due to hunger.
For instance
, the extreme example of in-equal distribution of wealth is in
the USA
where only 1% of the population owns 97% of the Country’s wealth.
On the contrary
, people who believe that
is important in improving people’s lives argue that it provides jobs to people and reduces unemployment rate.
in turn
promotes consumerism which means that people will buy and consume more. In order to
put in effect
the demand of consumers, industries would be established, more industries would mean more jobs and less unemployment. In conclusion, in my opinion too much focus on
leads to an in-equal income distribution in any society,
is far more dangerous than the benefit of its role in creating employment opportunities.
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