Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems as well as practical problems. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

It is an ongoing trend witnessed around the world that many people travel overseas for either work or education.

Its

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is agreed that linguistic barrier is one the serious issues faced by

such

people. Feelings of loneliness, unacceptability at workplace and difficulties in expression are few challenges endured by immigrants and students who travel to far off lands in the hope of doing great.

Language

is an indispensable tool of communication. Learning a new

language

requires years of practice to attain fluency and command. Inability to speak in the native/local

language

impacts the confidence of a newly joined employees or students. It makes them feel

unwelcomed

not welcome; not giving pleasure or received with pleasure

unwelcome

and are

also

misunderstood by the employer and colleagues.

Moreover

, failure of verbal expression gradually secludes them from the social group which at times leads to loneliness

and soon depression

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and depression soon

. It

also

creates trouble with the government officials and working.

For instance

, a study done by UNESCO showed Sydney as the

second

most

unwelcoming

city towards immigrants.

Furthermore

, students who find difficulty in comprehending

the

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the language to perform

language

perform poorly at the university

level which

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level, which

often leads them to be bullied and mocked by fellow classmates. Many people who find the

language

complicated to speak and understand face hardships in

find locating

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finding, locating

finding locating

areas or using the public transport. Chances of getting robbed and tricked by the local goons or shopkeepers, who take advantage of

this

inability, are high. One of my friends who went to Paris for graduation was deceived by her own classmates and was strangled at a dingy place. In conclusion, learning the formal

language

is highly recommended

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for

people travelling or immigrating as

this

can enhance their chances of adapting to the

new country well

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new country as well

. Know-how of the

language

can cause not just social troubles but can

also

have practical implications on living and lifestyle of people.

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linguistic proficiency
cross-cultural communication
miscommunication
social integration
linguistic alienation
cultural dissonance
language acquisition
communication breakdown
interpreter services
language courses
bilingualism
multilingualism
language barrier
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