With the increase in the use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people are writing letters. Some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters will disappear completely. How important do you think letter writing is?Do you think letter writing will completely disappear?

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advances, emerging cellphones and new computers caused a significant decrease in the
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who are skilled to write
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letters
. Some individuals assume that
this
traditional proficiency will be eliminated soon.
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essay will discuss how important
letter
writing is and whether it will completely vanish or not. One of the most important traits of every community is how expert its
people
are to communicate with each other in an official way. The business interaction between political and economic organizations is only possible with the existence of writing official
letters
due to the fact that every kind of company has its own professional
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, words and phrases. The importance of writing
letters
has experienced a downward trend by ordinary
people
especially the individuals who are accustomed to using social applications
such
as Telegram.
However
; it has remained an undeniable task for every company to have clerks write official
letters
.
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, a financial corporation must write a specific
letter
to the
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bank of
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in order to ask for a loan or financial aid. To sum, In spite of decreasing significance of writing
letters
in modern families and millennials,
this
skill is still a major requirement for reputed organizations. In the future, more companies will get
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of using specific smart applications to operate the process of communicating and technology will contribute
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skill as a support for workers in
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section of every incorporation. One of the assumptions about future means of communication is using Robots. They are considered to be one of the most revolutionary inventions of the recent century and they are going to take the responsibility of clerks who are in charge of writing
letters
. Authorities and governors are willing to develop
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of machines in order to overcome existing drawbacks in the companies and fasten the process of their service to the clients.
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, a robotic device can accomplish the task of multiple workers in a shorter period of time and help
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people
save their time. In a nutshell, robots and new technological devices may be used to communicate and make writing
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vanished totally. All in all, despite the fact that writing
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letter
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is assumed to be
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part of every society, the revolution of technology and emerging software will replace
this
ancient proficiency as a more modern
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Submitted by hassani.amir on

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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