With the increase in the use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people are writing letters. Some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters will disappear completely. How important do you think letter writing is?Do you think letter writing will completely disappear?

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advances, emerging cellphones and new computers caused a significant decrease in the

people

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number of people

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who are skilled to write

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letters

. Some individuals assume that

this

traditional proficiency will be eliminated soon.

This

essay will discuss how important

letter

writing is and whether it will completely vanish or not. One of the most important traits of every community is how expert its

people

are to communicate with each other in an official way. The business interaction between political and economic organizations is only possible with the existence of writing official

letters

due to the fact that every kind of company has its own professional

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, words and phrases. The importance of writing

letters

has experienced a downward trend by ordinary

people

especially the individuals who are accustomed to using social applications

such

as Telegram.

However

; it has remained an undeniable task for every company to have clerks write official

letters

.

For instance

, a financial corporation must write a specific

letter

to the

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bank of

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in order to ask for a loan or financial aid. To sum, In spite of decreasing significance of writing

letters

in modern families and millennials,

this

skill is still a major requirement for reputed organizations. In the future, more companies will get

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of using specific smart applications to operate the process of communicating and technology will contribute

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this

skill as a support for workers in

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section of every incorporation. One of the assumptions about future means of communication is using Robots. They are considered to be one of the most revolutionary inventions of the recent century and they are going to take the responsibility of clerks who are in charge of writing

letters

. Authorities and governors are willing to develop

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of machines in order to overcome existing drawbacks in the companies and fasten the process of their service to the clients.

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, a robotic device can accomplish the task of multiple workers in a shorter period of time and help

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people

save their time. In a nutshell, robots and new technological devices may be used to communicate and make writing

letter

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letters

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vanished totally. All in all, despite the fact that writing

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letter

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is assumed to be

inseparable

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an inseparable

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part of every society, the revolution of technology and emerging software will replace

this

ancient proficiency as a more modern

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