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Films and computer games which contain violence are very popular. Some people believe they have a negative effect on society and so should be banned. Other people, however, say they are just harmless and help people to relax. Discuss both these points of view and give your own opinion.

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Multimedia games
Suggestion
Multimedia, games
 containing violent content are liked by many across the globe. A section of the society believes that they should be banned because of their negative impacts. Others opine that
computer
 games are a way to relax and should not be banned. I agree with the former opinion as violence-filled
computer
games alter
Accept comma addition
games, alter
 the psychology of humans
besides
 being a
waste
 of
time
. On the one hand, playing
computer
 games is regarded as the best pass-
time
 activity. People have a hectic routine with very little
time
 to enjoy themselves. As
such
,
computer
 games are played by a number of people to soothe their nerves after a day’s hectic routine.
Moreover
, playing
computer
 games is the easiest leisure activity to undertake. Unlike outdoor or arcade games, one can play multimedia games on a screen without having to arrange other players at any
time
.
On the other hand
, the psychological and individual impacts of violence-marred multimedia games can only be seen as negative.
Firstly
,
computer
 games
alter
Suggestion
alters
 the psychology of the people, making them indifferent to violence. As blood and gore is fed over a period of
time
, the brain develops a sort of immunity to it. Eventually, people lose conscience and act indifferent to violence in actual life.
Secondly
,
computer
 games are unproductive and a number of people
waste
 their
time
 on them. The learning opportunity in violent games is almost nil and people, especially youngsters,
waste
 a lot of
time
 which could be spent
at
Suggestion
on
 a rather productive task. In conclusion, and in my opinion,
although
computer
 games are thought to be of importance for people’s entertainment, their gory content castes a very bad psychological impact on people.
Also
,
computer
 games are a
waste
 of
time
 and
therefore
, they should be banned for
masses
Suggestion
the masses
.
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