Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, museums are the only places to know in depth of our heritage and ancestral daily routines. As there is no other better option to know about our history. In my opinion, I believe it is worth spending
small amount
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a small amount
to know our heritage. As it will reduce
burden
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the burden
of maintaining museums on government. While other museums where there is no charges to visit, it is not that well maintained neither guide to give more or in depth information. Museums are very costly to maintain, as there are many things to keep safe and they are very precious. There are various things in the museums to look after and maintain without losing the originality. One good example is Museum in the state of
Hyderabad India
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Hyderabad, India
, which consist of the Great Nizam’s complete empire clothing’s and the huge military
armors
weapons considered collectively
arms
armours
with various kinds of weapons, which were used
on
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at
that time are maintained by the government of Hyderabad state. By charging
small amount
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a small amount
from
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of
the visitors. Creates seriousness in the
visitors
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visitor's
mind.
On the other hand
, free museums are not well maintained and not are not in proper standards. Those they follow the principle of equality by not charging money from poor or rich. By not charging money from the visitors it is very difficult to bear cost to look after the whole museum.
Such
as, Shivaji museum in India, is
free but
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free, but
the museum is not well organized and there is no one to give the in depth information about the special events of that time. To conclude, for the best experience paid museums are better in many ways. As they are well maintained and organized. While, free museums will not
do
engage in
make
that much impact on the person’s mind as they are not that much well look after. Though there are
draw backs
the quality of being a hindrance
drawbacks
of
charging but
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charging, but
advantages are more for paid museums.

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