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Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Education is the utmost right of every individual and no rule should cause one been refrained from the same.
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, these
days many
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days, many
 universities are planning or has started the intake of equal number of male and female students in every stream.
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step
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 has been equally appreciated and criticized by the people on the larger platform. Since I agree
to
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with
this
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 thought to a limited extent, In
this
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 essay, I am going to discuss the both sides of the statement and its impacts. To start with, In many nations like
Pakistan where
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Pakistan, where
womens
an adult female person (as opposed to a man)
women
 are still limited to household work and are not allowed to go out of home. And men
usually acts
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usually act
 as the protagonist and performs all the decision making.
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step
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 will help in
upliftment
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the upliftment
 of
women
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woman's
women's
 condition in the country, which in turn will help the society as well.
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, there are many subjects which are being stereotyped based on gender.
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, cooking is still considered as females work and driving is men's. With
such
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 rule
wrt
(law) a legal document issued by a court or judicial officer
writ
world
 gender equality in
opting subject
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the opting subject
opting subjects
 in universities, it will allow people from different background to try and excel in
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 fields.
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,
such
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 regulations may cause a discrimination where the deserving candidates are left out and less deserving ones
gets
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get
 the position. In populous countries like India, where universities offers limited seats with respect to number of applicants; it becomes unfair for those who are better in
accolades but
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accolades, but
 due to
such
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 norms they have been discarded for admission to those universities. All in all, educational establishments
has already started
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have already started
 or many are still considering giving
weightage
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 to gender equality in every subject. By introduction of
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, it will give an edge to the society by providing an equal
chances
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chance
 to all genders during subject selection. Whereas, it may lead to inequality with meritorious students and undeserving ones may flourish.
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, it is important
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that such a step
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step
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 should be rationalised before implementation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender equality
  • diversity
  • inclusivity
  • balanced
  • learning environment
  • opportunities
  • perspectives
  • gender stereotypes
  • fairness
  • equal opportunities
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