With the coming of new mass communication media like television and internet, newspaper is losing its importance.Do you agree with this or not ?

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The face of communication changed with
advent
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the advent
of
newpaper
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new paper
. As the technology advanced, many other mass media interacting devices like radio
,
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television
and internet came into action.Though, these devices have many positive sides, still
,
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I believe they cannot outweigh the eminence of
newspaper
.
Firstly
,
newspaper
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the newspaper
is a medium to interact with
large mass
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large masses
a large mass
of people.
Also
,
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,
it is cheap and providing flexibility to carry it whenever you want and read it whenever you are free.
Moreover
, it can be piled so one can get access to read old
newpaper
a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements
newspaper
, if one wishes to.
Newspaper
focuses more on local news
,
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,
while
internet
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the internet
and
television
serve as a global and international medium.
For instance
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in my state
,
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Gujarat, there are many regional
newpapers
a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements
newspapers
like Gujarat Samachar, Sandesh, Divya Bhaskar
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
which keeps you updated with what is happening in our surroundings.
Secondly
, many argue that
television
, radio and
internet
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the internet
provide a lot of entertainment and information
,
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which is not provided by
newpaper
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the newspaper
newspaper
newspapers
.
However
, I totally disagree with
this
view, as
Newspaper
supplement cover varied subjects right from education to spiritual preaching.
For example
, 'Times Ascent' in Times of India
serve
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serves
as a purpose to find recruitment
in addition
to providing best management tips and lessons.
Moreover
, many entertaining sections like jokes, cartoon pictures are
also
covered.
Editorial section
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An editorial section
in
newspaper
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a newspaper
the newspaper
provide
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provides
you
indepth
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in depth
knowledge regarding recent happenings in the world. In conclusion, as the famous saying quotes "old is Gold", the importance of
newspaper
can never be outweighed by other mass interacting devices like radio
,
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Internet or
television
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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