With the coming of new mass communication media like television and internet, newspaper is losing its importance.Do you agree with this or not ?

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The face of communication changed with

advent

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the advent

newpaper

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new paper

. As the technology advanced, many other mass media interacting devices like radio

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television

and internet came into action.Though, these devices have many positive sides, still

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I believe they cannot outweigh the eminence of

newspaper

Firstly

newspaper

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the newspaper

is a medium to interact with

large mass

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large masses

a large mass

of people.

Also

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it is cheap and providing flexibility to carry it whenever you want and read it whenever you are free.

Moreover

, it can be piled so one can get access to read old

newpaper

a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements

newspaper

, if one wishes to.

Newspaper

focuses more on local news

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while

internet

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the internet

and

television

serve as a global and international medium.

For instance

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in my state

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Gujarat, there are many regional

newpapers

a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements

newspapers

like Gujarat Samachar, Sandesh, Divya Bhaskar

etc

continuing in the same way

etc.

which keeps you updated with what is happening in our surroundings.

Secondly

, many argue that

television

, radio and

internet

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the internet

provide a lot of entertainment and information

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which is not provided by

newpaper

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the newspaper

newspaper

newspapers

However

, I totally disagree with

this

view, as

Newspaper

supplement cover varied subjects right from education to spiritual preaching.

For example

, 'Times Ascent' in Times of India

serve

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serves

as a purpose to find recruitment

in addition

to providing best management tips and lessons.

Moreover

, many entertaining sections like jokes, cartoon pictures are

also

covered.

Editorial section

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An editorial section

newspaper

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a newspaper

the newspaper

provide

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provides

you

indepth

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in depth

knowledge regarding recent happenings in the world. In conclusion, as the famous saying quotes "old is Gold", the importance of

newspaper

can never be outweighed by other mass interacting devices like radio

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Internet or

television

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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To conclude
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Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
23Grammar mistakes
 

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251 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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With the coming of new mass communication media like television and internet, newspaper is losing its importance.Do you agree with this or not ?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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