Education for young people is important in many countries. However, others think government should spend more money for education in adult population who cannot read and write. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a growing argument that Governments should focus more investment on

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adults and

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, people who are illiterate as there is already enough emphasis placed on the

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of young people in schools and Universities. In my opinion, I disagree with

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idea for various reasons which I will illustrate in the following paragraphs. The

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argument is that children are our future. They will inherit

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providing the younger population with a quality

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should be a priority for each individual nation. The Importance of early childhood

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cannot be ignored in terms of the evolution and growth emotionally, socially and physically of young children.

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will have a direct effect on their overall

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and on the adult, they will one day become.

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why understanding the need to invest in very young children is so important, so as to maximize their future well-being.

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counts more than ever in

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rapid change and technological advancement ever more present so it is children and the younger generations who must receive the most attention and care to ensure a high standard of learning.

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, Youngsters tend to be more intelligent and creative compared to older people. They have the advantages of more free time and more motivation to learn compared with

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educating them is an easier task. Added benefits

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as a better memory and ability to grasp knowledge in a faster and more productive way prove that young people can make the most of their opportunities and in turn contribute to society.

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means that educating them is necessary for the positive growth and

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of any nation.

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,

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of adults is

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a need as it would help to alleviate present problems. Some investment in increasing the literacy rate does help to reduce unemployment and transform an individual’s

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. Governments should recognise the role that adult

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can play in the economic and social

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and as an example, poverty reduction, etc. To sum up, a good quality

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is one that provides all learners with

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the capabilities

they require to become economically productive, for developing sustainable livelihoods, to contribute societies and enhance individual well-being. In my view, The rewards and positives from focusing efforts on young children outweigh those of adults.