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Topic -Today,most people get married and give birth in their thirties rather than when they are younger. IS this a positive and negative development?

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It has been widely noted that
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married couples prefer to conceive in their late thirties rather than in their young ages
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which make them indulge into the crevasse of physical health issues and social extol.
This
 trend could have both
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positive and negative consequences in equal measures which
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refers to the speaker or writer
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further
 with reasons and examples. The fundamental reason
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for
 an individual’s
perspective;today’s
 young generation propose to be
get
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getting
 self dependent and highly qualified
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thus
 they want to choose their life partner at their own determinations
such
 as same profession or at
same wages
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the same wages
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which is good for
young anthology
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a young anthology
the young anthology
 to be in smooth and everlasting relationship.
As a result
 Deliberately youngsters get married in their late thirties
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affirmatively without being under the generosity and indebtedness of their parents they want to spend their life of
fascinated
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fascinating
 creeks by being
conceitedly
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conceited
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However
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it is
been
the state or fact of existing
being
 recommended that late thirties pregnancies
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have
 high mortality records in instances
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it is
been
the state or fact of existing
being
 elucidated in 1995 that after conducting a survey report
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to collect the data on postpartum mortality rate
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its
it is
it's
 been allegedly recorded by WHO
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that giving birth after the age of 30 consider as under the case of high risk owing to the risk of
morther’s
a woman who has given birth to a child (also used as a term of address to your mother)
mothers
mother’s
mothers’
 death
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dysmorphic
 baby and other health complications which makes a nuisance of newborns and gravid’s survival rates during and after the delivery of
infant
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the infant
an infant
infants
. In conclusion
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it is imperative to get marry in
late twenties
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the late twenties
 and conceive before
thirties
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the thirties
 to downplay the deleterious and detrimental effects of late age pregnancies and to give better parenthood
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happy and healthy married life. ◦
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