Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Sports are an important part of
indivisual's
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Indivisual's
individual
growth and there is no
sport
which can be considered less than the other.Sports like tennis or swimming have advantages
such
as independent growth and learning how to compete with oneself
,
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,
however according
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however, according
to my opinion
team
sports teach a
person
much more in
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the act of examining resemblances
comparison
.
This
essay will cover views for both and
also
how
team
sports generally prove to be a better choice in my opinion. To survive in
society it
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society, it
is important that a
person
must
posses
have as an attribute, knowledge, or skill
possess
good social skills
such
as
team work
cooperative work done by a team (especially when it is effective)
teamwork
and cooperation and the
team
sports teach a
person
exactly the same.It makes a
person
adaptable with different type of personalities and adjust according to the
team
requirements.These qualities are always required
to
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To
live a happy and satisfactory life.
For example
,
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,
a
person
must know how to adjust with different type of people in office and
also
at home to be able to settle without much
conflicts
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conflict
.Learning these simple social skills help a
person
to be a better citizen for the society as well as an asset for any organization he associates them with.
Although
I am inclined towards the group sports
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but we cannot deny the fact that the
indivisual
a human being
individual
sports
also
have their own advantages.
Firstly
,
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sports like swimming teaches people to compete
with themselves which
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with themselves, which
proves to be an asset in one's life.There is less blaming on the other people or
environment
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the environment
and more focus on one's own faults.
For example
,
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,
if a
person
plays
single tennis match
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a single tennis match
and does not do so well
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,
he knows who is at fault and when you accept your own mistakes
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,
there is always a scope of improvement.
Secondly
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the major advantage is that a
person
can always go and play these sports alone
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,
whenever he gets time if the peers are not available.
Thus
the dependency is decreased and you can keep yourself fit. In my opinion group sports teach a
person
much more than the
indivisual
a human being
individual
ones and the social qualities
are
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is
really important for a
person
to survive in the world without hassle
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,
but with the advantages of independent growth and independent fitness regime that a
person
can follow with
indivisual
a human being
individual
sport
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,
it is not a bad choice either.To recapitulate
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whether group or independent
sport
,
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,
it is a must to learn
atleast
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at least
one
sport
and keep your mind and body fit and healthy by indulging in the same.
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