Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #part #sports #teams #football #tennis

Sports are an important part of

indivisual's

Suggestion

Indivisual's

individual

growth and there is no

sport

which can be considered less than the other.Sports like tennis or swimming have advantages

such

as independent growth and learning how to compete with oneself

Accept space

however according

Accept comma addition

however, according

to my opinion

team

sports teach a

person

much more in

comparsion

the act of examining resemblances

comparison

This

essay will cover views for both and

also

how

team

sports generally prove to be a better choice in my opinion. To survive in

society it

Accept comma addition

society, it

is important that a

person

must

posses

have as an attribute, knowledge, or skill

possess

good social skills

such

team work

cooperative work done by a team (especially when it is effective)

teamwork

and cooperation and the

team

sports teach a

person

exactly the same.It makes a

person

adaptable with different type of personalities and adjust according to the

team

requirements.These qualities are always required

Suggestion

live a happy and satisfactory life.

For example

Accept space

person

must know how to adjust with different type of people in office and

also

at home to be able to settle without much

conflicts

Suggestion

conflict

.Learning these simple social skills help a

person

to be a better citizen for the society as well as an asset for any organization he associates them with.

Although

I am inclined towards the group sports

Accept space

but we cannot deny the fact that the

indivisual

a human being

individual

sports

also

have their own advantages.

Firstly

Accept space

sports like swimming teaches people to compete

with themselves which

Suggestion

with themselves, which

proves to be an asset in one's life.There is less blaming on the other people or

environment

Suggestion

the environment

and more focus on one's own faults.

For example

Accept space

if a

person

plays

single tennis match

Suggestion

a single tennis match

and does not do so well

Accept space

he knows who is at fault and when you accept your own mistakes

Accept space

there is always a scope of improvement.

Secondly

Accept space

the major advantage is that a

person

can always go and play these sports alone

Accept space

whenever he gets time if the peers are not available.

Thus

the dependency is decreased and you can keep yourself fit. In my opinion group sports teach a

person

much more than the

indivisual

a human being

individual

ones and the social qualities

are

Suggestion

really important for a

person

to survive in the world without hassle

Accept space

but with the advantages of independent growth and independent fitness regime that a

person

can follow with

indivisual

a human being

individual

sport

Accept space

it is not a bad choice either.To recapitulate

Accept space

whether group or independent

sport

Accept space

it is a must to learn

atleast

Suggestion

at least

one

sport

and keep your mind and body fit and healthy by indulging in the same.

Submitted by abc on Fri Apr 19 2019

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

9Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
29Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

387 words

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

cooperation
team spirit
sense of belonging
community
leadership
trust
collective responsibility
dependency
self-reliance
self-discipline
goal setting
tailored development
flexibility
social support

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5
band
A lot of money is spent on repairing old building. Instead of repairing old building that money should be spent on knocking down old building and building new ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is an ongoing debat about old-age buildings and whether these construction should be repaired or be replaced with brand new buildings. My perspective is, although traditional constructions can evoke the sense of nostalgia, building new ones can be more beneficial. The following paragraphs will diccuss this assertion.
7
band
You need a website for your business, and you would like to ask your friend to build it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Include a brief description of your business Explain what you would like to have on the website Provide some ideas on the use of images on the website.
I hope you are doing well and I'm sorry that I haven't had a conversation with you for such a long time. Perhaps you know that I recently started my own business and my life has been a little bit crazy during the past few months. Actually, I'm writing to ask if you could do me a favour in helping me create a website for the business as I know you're a specialist in the field of digital design.
5
band
Playing computer games only has negative effects on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Nowadays video game industry is a huge trend, and society claim that games has negative effect on children. I strongly diasgree with this statement, first of all, because most of computer games have a lot of positive ascpets, and can be used to teach children using gamefication factor.
5.5
band
It is observed that, currently more and more people are working longer hours. What are the causes of this phenomenon? What effects does this have on the society?.
In the modern era, performance has become an indispensable part of human life. It is believed that some individuals that people have started doing job for long hours to fulfil their needs. In this essay, I will discuss the main reasons behind this notion and, I will also explain how this phenomenon can be harmful to society.
7
band
Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?
There have been observations that a growing number of animal species are becoming extinct, and some others are also showing similar signs. Several factors contributing to this negative trend, especially in the fishing industry, include the use of illegal fishing equipment, and overfishing, and this essay discusses ways to prevent this negative phenomenon from happening.

Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

A lot of money is spent on repairing old building. Instead of repairing old building that money should be spent on knocking down old building and building new ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You need a website for your business, and you would like to ask your friend to build it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Include a brief description of your business Explain what you would like to have on the website Provide some ideas on the use of images on the website.

Playing computer games only has negative effects on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is observed that, currently more and more people are working longer hours. What are the causes of this phenomenon? What effects does this have on the society?.

Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?