Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Sports are an important part of

indivisual's

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Indivisual's

individual

growth and there is no

sport

which can be considered less than the other.Sports like tennis or swimming have advantages

such

as independent growth and learning how to compete with oneself

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however according

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however, according

to my opinion

team

sports teach a

person

much more in

comparsion

the act of examining resemblances

comparison

This

essay will cover views for both and

also

how

team

sports generally prove to be a better choice in my opinion. To survive in

society it

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society, it

is important that a

person

must

posses

have as an attribute, knowledge, or skill

possess

good social skills

such

team work

cooperative work done by a team (especially when it is effective)

teamwork

and cooperation and the

team

sports teach a

person

exactly the same.It makes a

person

adaptable with different type of personalities and adjust according to the

team

requirements.These qualities are always required

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live a happy and satisfactory life.

For example

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person

must know how to adjust with different type of people in office and

also

at home to be able to settle without much

conflicts

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conflict

.Learning these simple social skills help a

person

to be a better citizen for the society as well as an asset for any organization he associates them with.

Although

I am inclined towards the group sports

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but we cannot deny the fact that the

indivisual

a human being

individual

sports

also

have their own advantages.

Firstly

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sports like swimming teaches people to compete

with themselves which

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with themselves, which

proves to be an asset in one's life.There is less blaming on the other people or

environment

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the environment

and more focus on one's own faults.

For example

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if a

person

plays

single tennis match

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a single tennis match

and does not do so well

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he knows who is at fault and when you accept your own mistakes

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there is always a scope of improvement.

Secondly

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the major advantage is that a

person

can always go and play these sports alone

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whenever he gets time if the peers are not available.

Thus

the dependency is decreased and you can keep yourself fit. In my opinion group sports teach a

person

much more than the

indivisual

a human being

individual

ones and the social qualities

are

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really important for a

person

to survive in the world without hassle

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but with the advantages of independent growth and independent fitness regime that a

person

can follow with

indivisual

a human being

individual

sport

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it is not a bad choice either.To recapitulate

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whether group or independent

sport

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it is a must to learn

atleast

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at least

one

sport

and keep your mind and body fit and healthy by indulging in the same.

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Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

Children engaged in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumas. What are the main reasons of this? What solutions can you suggest?

The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, mobile phone and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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