Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing ?

Nowadays
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fashion has changed over the past few decades. A majority of individuals love to wear branded clothes
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People do
this
just for looks beautiful than others.
However
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it has both positive as well as
negative effect
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negative effects
the negative effect
a negative effect
on
people life
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a person's life
person's life
the person's life
. There are numerous reasons for
this
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Firstly
, the international brands are easily available everywhere with the advancement of technology. People can buy fashionable clothes according to their choice to look more attractive in front of others. Apart from
this
, it
also enhance
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also enhances
has also enhanced
the personality of human beings when they wear a trendy clothes
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Besides
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today the market
are totally flooded
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is totally flooded
with the number of various choices
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Due to
this
, many people like to try different clothes in different occasion to show their status in the community
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As a result
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they wear branded clothes.
Furthermore
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it is a good and
bad thing
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a bad thing
for both individuals and society
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First
and foremost
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the gap between wealthy and poorer is
rised
located or moved above the surround or above the normal position
raised
risen
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when rich people try fashionable clothes because these are more expensive which is not afforded by poop people
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Hence
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this
is the negative effect on society.
Secondly
, people come to know about new fashion and get a chance to try it which helps them to explore them in
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
part of the country
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In conclusion
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fashion is changed with passive of time. It is not
wrong thing
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a wrong thing
to try a fashionable
clothes but
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clothes, but
thing
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the thing
which is not right that discourage the poor people who do not purchase those clothes
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People should move according to the time
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