Most societies has its homeless people. Some people think that the best way to help them is to give them money. To what extent do you agree?

Globally, the majority of cities and towns have homeless people. Many hold the opinion that the key to getting them off the streets is by financially supporting them. I firmly disagree with
this
view. For the remainder of
this
essay
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will
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will, firstly
firstly
, explain why
this
is not effective and
secondly
, explore alternative methods.
To begin
with,
although
providing homeless individuals with money will help them for a couple of days, without enlightening them about what do to do with it and how to spend it efficiently is useless,
this
is because they
well
the capability of conscious choice and decision and intention
will
spend it all and remain homeless.
In addition
to
this
, a large proportion of these people are drug addicts.
Therefore
, giving them cash curbs the way for them to feed their addiction.
Consequently
, the issue of their lack of homes remains unsolved.
For example
, charity organizations like Give Them Homes, released a report in 2012 stating that, 80% of the homeless that they sponsored with a large cheque of 100,000 dollars became homeless again after visiting them a year later. Overall, teaching them the skills they need to survive through jobs will help tackle
this
dilemma.
However
, through accounting these finances into job teaching institutions, they can learn how to survive and be equipped with the experience they need to hold a job. If they were to attain employment, they can not only make money to feed themselves, but have enough to rent or purchase a living space.
For instance
, The Plumbing Scheme was introduced in Bristol in 2011, which facilitated the education of 56 homeless people about the art of plumbing, today they run a profitable plumbing company
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in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
have managed to stay
of
from a particular thing or place or position
off
the road and live comfortably. Undoubtedly,
this
is a much better approach. In conclusion, tackling the burden of homelessness is essential in maintaining a healthy society. While monetary financing is not the best method to fix
this
issue, there are other ways.
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