These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?

In modern world more parents share the life as taking care of children by the father and earning money by the mother. There are some underlying causes of
this
situation and in my
opinion it
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opinion, it
is a positive development.
Firstly
, in today's
world there
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world, there
are
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is
equal roles for men and women in business life, which triggers more women to work
for
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in
good jobs with competitive salaries. These women may pursue a successful career while their spouse takes the responsibility of their children and housework.
Also
, in business qualifications of employees are paramount and if a woman's
skills
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skill
outweighs her
husband's
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husband
, it
islogical
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is logical
for them to look for a job for the wife to make a better financial plan for their children, because the chance to find a better occupation is increased by high skills.
Second core reason
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The second core reason
for
this
sort of parental roles can be the skills to care for children. It is known that raising a child is an exhaustive task, which require great physical effort and sometimes leads to fatigue. Due to the fact that men have more muscle power than
momen
an adult female person (as opposed to a man)
women
, it is more facile for
male
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a male
to look after the children than for female.
For example
, the father can easily carry his children while displacing from place to place,
for instance
, from
park
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the park
to home.
Furthermore
, they will possess sufficient amount of energy to challenge with their kids while playing games
such
as running competitions or
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
physical activities.
Although
men are not skilled for housework sometimes, household
appliences
a device or control that is very useful for a particular job
appliances
help them to cook meals for kids and to succeed other fundamental housework. In conclusion, there are different reasons for men to take care of their kids while their spouses take the responsibility of working. I think
this
is a positive development for both men and women.

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