At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Tertiary students are increasingly
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
to other countries as part of their education.
Although
the disadvantages are, students might face problems with cultural and
language
barrier in foreign countries, the advantages are, they will gain proper life experience and degrees that will benefit them in their future careers. In my opinion, students
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
abroad will obtain more
education knowledge
Accept comma addition
education, knowledge
despite
language
difficulties. The greatest benefit of studying abroad is that students will gain proper life experiences that will improve their education and career. Studying overseas give more motivation to push harder and adapting to the modern lifestyle outside their home countries.
For example
, when I came to Ukraine to study as an eighteen-year-old boy, I had to adapt no matter what, I was motivated and pushed harder to a unique state and graduated with my degree.
Therefore
, the advantages of
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
overseas make you progress and grow as a person. The main disadvantages of students studying overseas are linguistics and cultural differences. These differences can be challenging because they will have difficulties learning languages and studying their coursework at the same time.
For instance
, while studying in Ukraine, I had difficulties learning Ukrainian and studying together,
also
expressing myself to the citizens of Ukraine, buying foodstuffs or interacting with people were inconvenient because of the
language
barrier.
Furthermore
, cultural differences
such
as food, dressing might
also
be burdensome. In conclusion, there is an increase in the number of students studying abroad. Despite its disadvantages
on
Suggestion
in
of
society and
language
barriers, these drawbacks will lead to personal growth and advantageous achievements in the future.

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