Some people believe school children should be given multiple short vacations, while others believe they should get one long vacation. Give advantages of both and express your own point of views.

These days, children prefer long vacations as compared to short vacations. While some people contend that school children need numerous short vacations, others deem that they prefer long vacation. I agree with the latter argument, and in
this
essay, I will discuss both advantages with my view.
To begin
, it is advantageous for children to provide them with multiple short vacations, for they can take a break from studies frequently.
This
is because pupils get rid of mental stresses
such
as reading for several hours, focusing on a particular thing for a long time that may hamper their studies.
Similarly
, kids shall have enough time to spend with their
love
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loved
ones. The reason for
this
is to visit
relatives’ house
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a relatives’ house
relatives’ houses
on a holiday like a weekend or even a public holiday for entertainment.
However
, there are benefits for children in getting a long vacation too. The school children will join some coaching classes to enhance extracurricular activities as well. Some kinds of entertainment,
for instance
, singing, dancing, swimming, language classes
helps
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help
them a lot in acquiring positive outputs.
In addition
, students at school could travel to
world tour
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world tours
a world tour
with their family and friends.
This
happens because kids are keen to know about other’s culture, tradition, norms, values, and lifestyles, so to generalize it in their lives. Children tend to show interest in others cuisines, festivals, and clothes as well. In conclusion, since the benefits of short vacations are taking breaks frequently and spending valuable times with loved ones, there are advantages of having
long vacation
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a long vacation
as well like joining coaching classes and
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
world tour. Personally, I believe long holiday is better.
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