Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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an
opinions
about local Suggestion
opinion
business
from some people which is due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket
in some countries. This
can lead to the death of local communities, while I strongly disagree with this
view for many reasons.
Increasing revenue is a benefit for many small and local business
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businesses
Firstly
, if supermarket
spread
around the world, inhabitants of Suggestion
spreads
local area
could have a better chance to sell their goods to a greater number of customers since the Suggestion
the local area
supermarket
also
need supply some products and sell to people. Certainly, the local goods is
more convenient than others because of shipping costs. Suggestion
are
For example
, when the Big C Mart, which is one of the biggest supermarket
in Vietnam, were established in Vietnam, they open Suggestion
supermarkets
supermarket
around my country. It means everyone can buy products anywhere they like even the outskirt of megapolis
city. Meanwhile, they Suggestion
Megapolis
sells
loads of goods base on demand from their customers, as well as these Suggestion
sell
also
have local products.
In order to compete, local business
also need
to best quality and pride which is Suggestion
also needs
also
some advantages. Indeed, while supermarket
is developing, local company can be easier to see clearly their opponent. Suggestion
the supermarket
As a result
, they would invest more money to
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This
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better
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products
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product
market
and attract customers. Suggestion
the market
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Besides
, the establishment of supermarkets can help to feel pride. It can be seen in this
case where local items presents
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present
in
shelves of Suggestion
on
supermarket
, thereby enabling rapid expansion around the globe. By doing it, Suggestion
supermarkets
the supermarket
a supermarket
brand
might become popular, as well as local citizens can feel proud to use and speak to foreign people that their country Suggestion
the brand
also
have a famous product.
In conclusion, despite supermarkets is developing and rapidly expanding, it does not affect badly to local business
. It can help them in many ways, including revenue, best quality and pride.
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