Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet. What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved?

In today's world where Globalization has taken
such
a toll on human beings that maintaining a healthy
diet
has just become a part of history and is rarely followed by the people. Due to the increase in globalization, people have strict timelines for everything and they don't have much time to think about their
diet
or what they are eating. They just eat whatever they get in hand and people don't want to spend much time on cooking rather than that they prefer frozen
food
which is already cooked and can be directly consumed but overeating of that type of
food
has
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
hazardous effects on
human body
Suggestion
the human body
.
Also with
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Also, with
the increase in the salaries of
people
Suggestion
the people
they spend more on Junk
food
which has become extremely popular by the of advent many fast
food
chains. The quality of
food
and vegetable has
also
decreased as there is an increase in the population and to feed the increased number of people artificial methods of agriculture is being used to quickly grow the non-seasonal fruits and vegetables which is not considered to be very healthy. With the growing issues of health problems following a non-healthy
diet
should be one of the major concerns among the communities. Government has to take control for the abolishment of the
usage
Suggestion
use
of false practices by the farmer for the growth of fruits and vegetables. The government can provide
them other facilities
Suggestion
them to other facilities
which should stop these habits. The respective authorities can
also
control the growth of fast
food
ventures which are indirectly influencing people to opt for Junk
food
.
Also
, awareness has to be spread among people about the benefits of a healthy
diet
and what impact it can have on the human body if not followed. A Healthy
diet
is a need of the future generation and if not followed by the people living
today
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today, then
then
it can have huge impacts on the coming generation.

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