Some governments provide financial assistance for retired, unemployed and disabled citizens. In other countries, families provide support for these people. Discuss both systems and give your opinion about which one you think is better.

It is well known that in some countries, people with special needs
such
as those who are retired, without a job, or mentally and physically disabled are receiving financial
assistance
from their
government
.
However
, in some other countries,
this
group of people are living without any subsidy and are forced to rely on their families.
This
essay will discuss both these political systems and provide reasons for why the system that provides financial
assistance
is better for the individuals as well as the society. Financial
assistance
from the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
is vital and beneficial for people with special needs who cannot live independently.
For example
, a person who has been in a car accident and become severely injured is unable to function without
assistance
. Unfortunately, their family members might not be available all the time to provide them with the
support
that they desperately need.
Thus
, they need external help in order to survive and make ends meet.
In addition
, a number of unemployed and disabled people, after receiving financial
assistance
the
government
, are able to get back on their feet and contribute to the society. Those who are able to secure employment will
also
pay income tax which will
further
help other people to recover from their misfortune.
On the other hand
, some other governments do not possess the resources to provide financial
assistance
for those in need.
As a result
, family members are expected to
support
these people.
Although
this
places pressure on many family members, they can provide better
support especially
Accept comma addition
support, especially
emotional
support
for their loved ones. As the old saying goes, “blood is thicker than water”.
Furthermore
, the people with special needs might enjoy the
assistance
from their families more than the
government
. In conclusion, even though disadvantaged citizens may benefit from both systems, I am of the opinion that the
goverments
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
government's
that provide financial subsidies are more helpful.
Therefore
,
this
form of
government
should be widely encouraged.
Submitted by milk_coffee_2009 on

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