Some governments provide financial assistance for retired, unemployed and disabled citizens. In other countries, families provide support for these people. Discuss both systems and give your opinion about which one you think is better.
It is well known that in some countries, people with special needs
such
as those who are retired, without a job, or mentally and physically disabled are receiving financial Linking Words
assistance
from their Use synonyms
government
. Use synonyms
However
, in some other countries, Linking Words
this
group of people are living without any subsidy and are forced to rely on their families. Linking Words
This
essay will discuss both these political systems and provide reasons for why the system that provides financial Linking Words
assistance
is better for the individuals as well as the society.
Financial Use synonyms
assistance
from the Use synonyms
goverment
is vital and beneficial for people with special needs who cannot live independently. the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
For example
, a person who has been in a car accident and become severely injured is unable to function without Linking Words
assistance
. Unfortunately, their family members might not be available all the time to provide them with the Use synonyms
support
that they desperately need. Use synonyms
Thus
, they need external help in order to survive and make ends meet. Linking Words
In addition
, a number of unemployed and disabled people, after receiving financial Linking Words
assistance
the Use synonyms
government
, are able to get back on their feet and contribute to the society. Those who are able to secure employment will Use synonyms
also
pay income tax which will Linking Words
further
help other people to recover from their misfortune.
Linking Words
On the other hand
, some other governments do not possess the resources to provide financial Linking Words
assistance
for those in need. Use synonyms
As a result
, family members are expected to Linking Words
support
these people. Use synonyms
Although
Linking Words
this
places pressure on many family members, they can provide better Linking Words
Use synonyms
support especially
emotional Accept comma addition
support, especially
support
for their loved ones. As the old saying goes, “blood is thicker than water”. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the people with special needs might enjoy the Linking Words
assistance
from their families more than the Use synonyms
government
.
In conclusion, even though disadvantaged citizens may benefit from both systems, I am of the opinion that the Use synonyms
goverments
that provide financial subsidies are more helpful. the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
government's
Therefore
, Linking Words
this
form of Linking Words
government
should be widely encouraged.
Use synonyms
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