some people believe that Government money should be spent on important things rather than arts such as painting and music. To what extent agree or disagree.
Whilst, many individuals think that authority money should be
expend
on essential objects rather than arts like Suggestion
expended
music
and painting. In my opinion, spending on health
and education
in top priority, but disagree with no funding for arts
. I would discuss about both these views in the following paragraphs.
To embark with, there are myriad reason, why I am claiming that authority should be Suggestion
the arts
spent
money on vital things Suggestion
spending
such
as health
and education
. The first
and an important reason, health
is necessary for everyone. These days, diseases are very common, all people suffer from many types of sickness like diabetes, obesity and asthma. For this
purpose, Government
should be opened more and more hospitals and Suggestion
the Government
health
center
; mankinds may do easily treatment. an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
Moreover
, education play
vital role in humankind' s life. If humanity will decent educated, Accept comma addition
education, play
country
will easily develop.
Contrary above to the statement, art is Suggestion
the country
also
important in humanity life
Accept comma addition
humanity, life
such
as painting and music
. Furthermore
, painting express
the emotions of Suggestion
expresses
masses
, there is no need learn to any type language Suggestion
the masses
for
understand it. Suggestion
to
Thus
, everyone can easily understand it; which has shown in the painting. In addition
to, melody illustrates the culture's music
, instead
of international music
. For example
, Vande Matram is special song
of India since it represents the nation. Suggestion
the special song
a special song
Music
creates more opportunities for employment; native can decent earn with the help of music
.
In
the conclusion, both are necessary for mankinds. Government should be Suggestion
At
spent
more money on Suggestion
spending
education
and health
, although
also
spending for art but in limit. Submitted by naresh on
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