Some people think that public libraries are no longer important while others disagree.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Public
librarie
a building that houses a collection of books and other materials
libraries
library
librarian
means
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mean
that everyone can
attemt
make an effort or attempt
attempt
to read or borrow a book.Many ascertain that
this
service is useless while others argue that public libraries are essential for a community.I personally agree with the fact that public libraries are valuable
for
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in
a society because they give the
abbility
the quality of being able to perform; a quality that permits or facilitates achievement or accomplishment
ability
to citizens to explore and read books and the option of choosing from a variety of different
kind
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kinds
of topics. On one hand
,
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,
libraries
nowdays
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
are not a
popylar
regarded with great favor, approval, or affection especially by the general public
popular
place to read anymore
,
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,
because of some factors that make them not easily accessible.
Firstly
,
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,
individuals in order to
attemt
make an effort or attempt
attempt
automate
they need to be transported there
,
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,
because not every vicinity has a public library.
Secondly
,
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,
people who want to read a book from the library at home they need to borrow it for a specific time and pay a fee.
Lastly
,
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,
ebooks are
nowdays
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
very
popylar so
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popular, so
popular so
individuals prefer them
instead
of the traditional paper books.
For example
,
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,
a research showed that 58% of people no longer visit
libraries but
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libraries, but
they
purchace
obtain by purchase; acquire by means of a financial transaction
purchase
purchased
ebooks
instead
and they claim that they save money and time.
In addition
,
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,
technology can be an obstacle for public libraries and lead them to permanent closure.
On the other hand
,

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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