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Today more and more people are using mobile phones and computers. Thus, people are losing the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is true that in recent year, many people have become over-reliant on using smart phones and tablet. While I agree that the proliferation of
technology
 makes people decrease an interaction with their friends, I do not consider that a technical breakthrough is a cause of people losing a connection with each other. On the one hand, the availability of new communication technologies may
also
 have the result of discouraging real interaction.
Firstly
, using mobile phones and computers which may not express a real emotional messenger. Through the application of e-mail services in smart phones, people can only transfer to text-
messaging which
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messaging, which
 cannot alleviate a sadness of their mental peers when they get in trouble in their life.
Thus
, the
technology
 makes people lose the facility for communicating
face
 to
face
.
Secondly
, smart phones can cause to the downfall of society’s interpersonal communication. As people can only pay attention the screen of their phones
that is
 a major cause
to
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for
 losing the ability to interact
face
 to
face
.
On the other hand
, I disagree that people become dependence on the modern
technology
 that can lose the ability to communicate
face
 to
face
. Primarily, message services
in
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on
 their phones are a useful tool to help accelerate the flow of information between their friends.
This
 is essential to help people share quickly ups and downs in their life rather than they have to meet directly.
In addition
, people can easily connect with each other in anytime and anywhere. They do not have their private time to participate in an anecdote about their friends because of a hectic schedule in the firms.
As a result
, using smart phones is the best way that can connect with their peers and help them release their
stresses
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stress
 after a full-time job. In conclusion,
although
 I accept that advances in
technology
 makes people isolate from their friends, I disagree that the development of
technology
 results in losing the ability to
face
 to
face
.
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  • erosion
  • interpersonal skills
  • overreliance
  • digital communication platforms
  • convenience
  • efficiency
  • social bonds
  • enhance
  • bridging long distances
  • fostering connections
  • age groups
  • adept
  • integrating
  • landscape
  • emotional intelligence
  • nuances
  • striking a balance
  • limitations
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