Governments should make more effort to promote alternative sources of energy. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Many authorities all over the world already pay attention on developing new resources of
energy
to replace the old ones
;
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;
However
, it seems not enough
hence
there are some ideas that they should try harder to encourage producers. In my point of view,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
totally support
this
viewpoint because of some reasons
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will mention underneath.
our
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Our
planet is running out of fossil fuels
such
as coal, gas and diesel in
near future
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the near future
,
therefore
it is incredibly important to find out some
altenative
one of a number of things from which only one can be chosen
alternative
sources of
energy
.
as
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As
we know nowadays the major percentage of energies which we are using come from minerals, it is really unsustainable growth for any nations or organizations because it will empty soon as predictions of some experts. Generally speaking, a host of political leaders
are keeping
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is keeping
an eye on
this
problem and investing
for
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in
many
studys
be a student; follow a course of study; be enrolled at an institute of learning
studies
to exploit new energies including sun, tidal and solar.
However
, not only expensive
technology but
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technology, but
also
unconvenient
not suited to your comfort, purpose or needs
inconvenient
conditions are two factors which hinder government to access and manipulate new energies in massive scale. As far as we are concerned, the Earth is polluted in many aspects
such
as air, water, soil.
This
is because human activities which burn coal, petrol, wood and gas for
energy
, so these elements end up spreading a massive gas emission which causes
green house
a building with glass walls and roof; for the cultivation and exhibition of plants under controlled conditions
greenhouse
effect in global scale.
Hence
, we should take
actions
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action
to cut down on demands for it. Take deforestation as an example, many regions in the world are
detroying
do away with, cause the destruction or undoing of
destroying
forests for fuel,
as a
result some
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result, some
natural disasters occur
frequently
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frequently, such
such
as flash floods or droughts because of lost
cover
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covered
by forests. Having said that, the more effective new energies, the more sustainable lives we can obtain. In conclusion, there are several serious concerns about
energy
in our era,
thus
, government should pay more attention on alternative resource of
energy
to solve those problems.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • To conclude
  • To summarize
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  • In general

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