You have recently moved to a different city for work, but you want to maintain contact with a friend from your previous workplace. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, •Describe the city you moved to •Tell him/her about your new job •Invite him/her to visit you You do NOT need to write any addresses

Dear Sam , I hope
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letter finds you in excellent health and best spirits. I am writing
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letter to inform you that I moved to another city Agra because I got an opportunity to work in a multinational company as a manager. The city is very exquisite and incredible and it has all the amenities. The main attraction of
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Mahal which is a tourist place and it is only 15 minutes away from my accommodation .
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, the environment at my workplace is very positive and 15 people are working under my supervision. My prime responsibilities are making reports and
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the enthusiasm of the employees. Whenever you have time please come to Agra , it would be fun and we will go for an excursion and let me know in advance so I can apply for vacation . I am so excited to see you and I am looking forward to hearing from you . Yours lovely, Harvi

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Try to add more details about the city and job to make it more interesting.
coherence and cohesion
Make sure each paragraph has a clear focus. For example, keep the job details separate from the city description.
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Check for small errors and improve sentence flow to make it easier to read.
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You have a friendly and warm tone, which is great for a letter.
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You included an invitation, which makes the letter more engaging.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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