Some people think that it is necessary to travel to learn about other countries. Others feel same can be learnt through TV and internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In recent times, there has been a high interest in knowing more about other nations, while some people think that a good

way

to learn about other places is through travelling there, others view

this

as unnecessary and state that it is possible to learn about other places through the internet and television. In my opinion, I consider visiting other countries a more effective

way

to learn about their

way

of life. On the one hand, some people believe that when people travel to other countries, they have a

first

-hand knowledge about the people and I agree.

In other words

, you have the opportunity to meet people who are sometimes entirely different from what you are familiar with and you are able to interact, understand their beliefs and values and even build personal relationships that

last

long

in to

expresses motion to a point on, or within, something

into

the future.

For example

, I visited my dream tour country- France

last

year and I literally experienced a different environment, enjoyed the traditional food and saw the country different from

objective form of "I"

what I thought it was.

This

entirely changed my mindset about the French people.

On the other hand

, others say that everything about a society can be learnt through television and the internet. They explain that everything about the world is available through social media and knowing about any nation of interest is easy today without having to travel there. To expatiate, they believe that through the internet, television documentaries and programs, you can understand the culture of a nation.

For instance

, online application has made it easy to connect with people in other environments and through video calls and online chats, you can meet and share

experience

Suggestion

experiences

with people from different societies. In conclusion, though people vary in the view about the need to travel to other society to know more about them, I strongly believe that the most effective

way

to learn, experience and appreciate other countries is by visiting and experiencing these societies.

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Summary
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Prediction or recommendation

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To conclude
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Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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1Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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