Some people believe that environmental problems can be solved by increasing the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Environmental problem
Suggestion
An environmental problem
has become a major issue in both developed and undeveloped countries. Some individuals share the view that
this
problems
Suggestion
problem
can be reduced by raising the cost of petrol for cars and other vehicles. I strongly agree with
this
view because
this
would result in less cars on the road leading to less environmental hazards
such
as smoke inhalation and
also
lead to increase economy. Uplifting the cost of
fuel
for cars to reduce environmental problems would be a means to an end.
In other words
,
this
act will reduce the amount of individuals who can afford petroleum thereby reducing the number of cars on the road,
thus
reducing air pollution. Take
for instance
, in Nigeria, a
liter
a metric unit of capacity, formerly defined as the volume of one kilogram of pure water under standard conditions; now equal to 1,000 cubic centimeters (or approximately 1.75 pints)
litre
of petrol is about 300
naira
Suggestion
Naira
more
, which is above the minimum wage of most individuals in the
country
.
This
act alone has reduced the number of cars, which in turn has reduced the environmental problems in the
country
.
In addition
,
increment
Suggestion
the increment
of petroleum will
also
improve the economy of the
country
.
Thus
, improving the environment. Many countries have developed their economical status solely on the increase of petroleum and
gas which
Accept comma addition
gas, which
in turn has decreased environmental hazards. Take
for example
, China, who in 2017, was recorded as the
country
with the ‘purest air to breathe’ by the World Health Organization.
This
was mainly achieved because the Chinese government increased
fuel
prices back in 2015 and these extra funds were diverted to other transportation systems which
in directly
not in a forthright manner
indirectly
reduced environmental hazards. If the government would raise the cost of
fuel
and divert the extra funds to other means of transportation
this
would reduce environmental problems. In conclusion, increment of
fuel
prices would aid in the eradication of environmental pollution which can be harmful to the health of the citizens as well as the globe as a whole.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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