Some people believe that money spent on space exploration is a waste and this money could be better used to fund other urgent problems in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Space

exploration has

inreasingly

advancing in amount or intensity

increasingly

becomes

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become

a debatable issue in recent time. It is believed that resources spent on it should be used to solve other immediate problems in the society.

This

essay will argue why exploring the

space

is ultimately necessary for

existence

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existing

as well as other important problems in the society should be provided with immediate solutions.

To begin

with, the necessity

for

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of

exploring the

space

still remains significantly

unnegotiable

capable of being passed or negotiated

negotiable

essential for mankind, as it has helped to

discovered

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discover

a lot of

hazard

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hazards

that could have been unknowingly befall us. The

earths'

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earth's

earths

temperature,

for instance

,

that is

progressively increasing recently, while the

this

could not have been known until the worse could have eventually happened, if not for research.

Additionaly

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Additionally

, geography,

however

, as a subject in school, would have been very boring without research into the

space

and nothing like number of

planet

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planets

and other discovery would have been known. These instances, made

space

exploration remains essentially important for existence and not a waste of money.

Conversely

, immediate problems encountered in the society should not be neglected for any reason, the people's comfort is essential and should be prioritized with adequate funding. A destitute will care less of the happenings around him and may not even appreciate nature. For these reasons, urgent problem should be focused on, to be resolved as soon as possible. Summarily,

this

essay argued why

space

exploration remains essentially important for mankind.

I personally

Accept comma addition

I, personally

,

specificallyy

in distinction from others

specifically

, believed that research into the

space

has continuously helped the world to discover and provide

some

one or some or every or all without specification

any

necessary solutions to avert any potential global disaster, for these reasons, it is not a waste of money and should be

continuously

seemingly without interruption

continually

funded.