Some people believe that money spent on space exploration is a waste and this money could be better used to fund other urgent problems in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Space
exploration has
inreasingly
advancing in amount or intensity
increasingly
becomes
Suggestion
become
a debatable issue in recent time. It is believed that resources spent on it should be used to solve other immediate problems in the society.
This
essay will argue why exploring the
space
is ultimately necessary for
existence
Suggestion
existing
as well as other important problems in the society should be provided with immediate solutions.
To begin
with, the necessity
for
Suggestion
of
exploring the
space
still remains significantly
unnegotiable
capable of being passed or negotiated
negotiable
essential for mankind, as it has helped to
discovered
Suggestion
discover
a lot of
hazard
Suggestion
hazards
that could have been unknowingly befall us. The
earths'
Suggestion
earth's
earths
temperature,
for instance
,
that is
progressively increasing recently, while the
this
could not have been known until the worse could have eventually happened, if not for research.
Additionaly
Suggestion
Additionally
, geography,
however
, as a subject in school, would have been very boring without research into the
space
and nothing like number of
planet
Suggestion
planets
and other discovery would have been known. These instances, made
space
exploration remains essentially important for existence and not a waste of money.
Conversely
, immediate problems encountered in the society should not be neglected for any reason, the people's comfort is essential and should be prioritized with adequate funding. A destitute will care less of the happenings around him and may not even appreciate nature. For these reasons, urgent problem should be focused on, to be resolved as soon as possible. Summarily,
this
essay argued why
space
exploration remains essentially important for mankind.
I personally
Accept comma addition
I, personally
,
specificallyy
in distinction from others
specifically
, believed that research into the
space
has continuously helped the world to discover and provide
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
necessary solutions to avert any potential global disaster, for these reasons, it is not a waste of money and should be
continuously
seemingly without interruption
continually
funded.

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