The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Since 1990s, the
internet
is booming at
such
a high rate that almost everyone in the developed countries has
access
to the
internet
in some form or the other. It has helped people to
access
wealth
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a wealth
the wealth
of
information
and connect with their friends and family through social media. But, it
also
poses risks to people's personal
information
and children are getting addicted to their phones. Nowadays, with the advancements in the mobile phones and cheaper
internet
data plans, more and more people are getting connected to the
internet
than ever before. People can read about the latest news, events and many other things from all around the world in just a few seconds. But due to the ease of
accees
the right to enter
access
to the
information
, many people don't realize that their personal
information
such
as birth date, passwords, social security number, bank account numbers and other private data can be stolen by hackers if they don't keep it secured.
For instance
,
man
a quantifier that can be used with count nouns and is often preceded by 'as' or 'too' or 'so' or 'that'; amounting to a large but indefinite number
many
hackers send the malicious software to people through email and if you click the link present in the email, they get
access
to
you
of you or yourself
your
computer or mobile phone and may get
access
to your bank accounts
also
. The other big problem due to
internet
access
is that the children in the current generation are so much addicted to their phones that they waste a lot of their precious time browsing
though
by means of; with aid of; through the act or agency of; "destroyed by fire"
through
internet
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the internet
or watching videos on
youtube
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YouTube
.
This
hamper their studies which in turn
affects
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affect
their career in a long run
As a result
, I think that
although
internet
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the internet
has provided
lot
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lots
of
benefit s
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
with the ease of accessing
information
, it can
also
turn out into
nightmare
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a nightmare
the nightmare
nightmares
if your private data
is not secured
Suggestion
are not secured
or your children spend too much time on their phones or computers.

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