You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to ask for information about the conference which is going to happen in your country on 23rd October 2019. I am a qualified software engineer and having 8 years of experience in
software
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the software

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quality assurance field. Fortunately, from a business
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news paper
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, I came to know about
this
seminar, fully dedicated
towards
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area
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of software testing.
This
training would help me to gain more knowledge and enhance my skills.
Moreover
, I would like to join it so request you to provide few details about
this
program.
Firstly
, I would like to know
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the schedules

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,venues and the duration so that I could
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plan

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accordingly
.
Furthermore
, I am
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planning

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to travel from India
hence
requires details of possible accommodation during
this
stay.
Also
, let me know
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program fee and total cost so I could arrange it well before time. I look forward to hearing from you. Your's faithfully, Satish Pandey
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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