Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is believed by some that there is an overwhelming
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of selections for us, and I completely agree with
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opinion. On the one hand, production is more facile in today's world.
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, science and technology is developed in the manufacturing sector;
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, a large
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of goods can be produced without any difficulty.
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, the mass production is realised using various devices
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as automated robots.
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, cheap workforce is available for businesses,
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, factories are built in countries which provide workers for low salaries
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as China or Taiwan. All in all, there more opportunity to produce a huge amount of products ranging from even a
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automobiles rather than the past, resulting in
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produced or growing in extreme abundance
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choices.
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, globalisation has made it quite simple to deliver the goods to the customers. There are different ways to sell more customized or more standardized items;
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, the Internet is today's fundamental platform to welcome customers for the sales of hand-made or cheap factory products
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as clothes or sports equipment. Especially social media increased the
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of sellers who deliver a vast amount of choices
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products. To illustrate, Instagram is highly used by people to purchase the artwork because most artists use it to be known by the society.
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, the
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of choices has skyrocketed because all of them are under the customers' hands. In conclusion, nowadays people have more and more choices on products than the past. In my view, the improvements and the opportunities in the manufacturing area is one of the
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for that, and the other reason is globalisation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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