Cricket has become more popular than the national sports in the sub-continental countries. What do you think are the reasons behind this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Cricket
, traditionally an English sport, is becoming more and more popular sport in the sub-continental countries
such
as India, Sri Lanka, Pakistan, Australia and many more. In my opinion, there are mainly two reasons for
this
popularity, good
performance
of the team and financial reward they are receiving nowadays.
To begin
with, I think the main reason for
this
increasing popularity is
excellent
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an excellent performance
performance
by teams over the period of a time. Due to
this
,
majority
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the majority
of the nations who
plays
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play
cricket
have won the ICC world cup at least once.
For example
, before 1983 ICC world cup,
Cricket
was not famous among people of the India, they were following another sport Hockey, which was one of the famous sports at that time
due the exceptional
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due to the exceptional
performance
of our Hockey players.
This
is the reason India is one of the top performers in all ICC tournaments and holding
1st rank
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the 1st rank
in One Day (ODI)
cricket
. Another reason of popularity is, financial reward offered to players these days. In terms of money,
cricket
players earning a huge amount of money from various adverts, league contracts
such
as IPL
(
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Indian Premier League) and BBL
(
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(
Big Bash league). To illustrate, in India, a report by The Tribune showed that an average earning of
cricket
player is 80% more than the average package of Hockey player. In conclusion,
although
in countries
such
as India, Hockey is a national sports
game but
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game, but
people who
lives
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live
there are passionate about
cricket
because of the excellent
performance
by prior players and a huge amount of money as a reward to their abilities.

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