Some people say that relationships should be based on honesty and trust. Others believe that it is sometimes necessary to be dishonest in order to maintain harmony. Which approach do you consider to be better in relationships and why? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Human relations are not only made up of blood relation like mother, father, in-laws or so on but,
infact
Suggestion
in fact
, others like friendship
also
fall under the word
relationsship
a relation between people; ('relationship' is often used where 'relation' would serve, as in 'the relationship between inflation and unemployment', but the preferred usage of 'relationship' is for human relations or states of relatedness)
relationship
. These relations should be strong and has to be maintained with utmost confidence, as
such
, to gain
such
confidence, they require
lot
Suggestion
lots
of
trust
, that which is gained out of honesty. Honesty and
trust
both are
inter-related
reciprocally connected
interrelated
interested
that
ther
in or at that place
there
their
is no existence of the latter
wihout
in absence of
without
the former
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
.
e
Suggestion
E
,
trust
comes out of honesty. That's why it is aptly said that, "Honesty Is The Best Policy". It is an
in born
present at birth but not necessarily hereditary; acquired during fetal development
inborn
emotion of
such
belief in children by parents, which need not be paid
attention but
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attention, but
, at times, need to prove themselves as and when the
third
person involves,
thus
resulting in rupture of the relations with false news or
informations
a message received and understood
information
. It is very easy to lose anything, whereas it is very tough to regain that back, ultimately takes
lot
Suggestion
a lot
of time,
may be
by chance
maybe
some years, sometimes. People often tell lies to maintain the
harmony but
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harmony, but
fact can never be hidden for long,
moreover
, comes out in an adverse way paving path to negative ending of relations.
For example
, a husband has invested certain
lumpsum
Suggestion
lump sum
of money in purchasing a land without his wife's notice, thinking she might be given a
thrill
the act of testing something
trial
, later as a gift or surprise. Later that area's price has fallen
down bringing
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down, bringing
this
person's place at
loss
Suggestion
a loss
. Now, he can neither disclose
this
fact nor keep it as secret which,
otherwise
, leaves him at
stake
Suggestion
the stake
.
Any how
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Anyhow
, after knowing
such
news, there occurs a breach of
trust
, thence, resulting in quarrels between that marital relation. Precisely, I opine that being frank is always the best way to maintain a firm bonding, irrespective of the reasons.
Submitted by Mrs. Sumira Vempati on

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