Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for individuals and the family than eating out in restaurants or canteens. Do you agree or disagree?

Throughout the
last
fifty years, the number and the variety of places serving meals has been dramatically increasing in most cities of the world.
Therefore
, it is debated whether domestic or restaurant
food
should be preferred. Whilst I broadly agree that
home
cooking is better than dining out, I have a number of reservations about
this
. Without doubt, eateries need to make their menu appealing in order to attract customers. It goes without saying that marketing strategies not always lead to
healthy
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healthier
choices.
First
and foremost, a recent chemical analysis of several
aliments
violent or severe weather (viewed as caused by the action of the four elements)
elements
reveals that addictive stimulants are routinely added to restaurant
food
and drinks.
Secondly
, the amount of salt and fats used by some dining facilities not only enriches the flavour of their dishes, but
also raise
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also raises
concerns
to
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of
the public.
For instance
, it has been demonstrated that an excessively salty and fatty diet is detrimental to blood pressure and cholesterol levels.
Moreover
, dining out might encourage people to eat more than their needs as seen in sushi train and all-you-can-eat restaurants. Admittedly, it is quite reasonable to argue that restaurants create employment.
In addition
, eating out is more
convinient
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
than preparing
food
at
home
.
However
, the time spent for
grocerie
a marketplace where groceries are sold
grocery
groceries
shopping, cooking and cleaning can be an occasion for families to share
responsabilities
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibilities
and time
toghether
in contact with each other or in proximity
together
altogether
.
For example
, cooking with my wife is for me one of the
sweatest
having or denoting the characteristic taste of sugar
sweetest
southwest
part of the day. In summary, both
home
cooking and
food
facilities carry some advantages for individuals and community.
However
, I am of the opinion that the drawbacks of preparing
meal
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meals
a meal
at
home
should never be allowed to overshadow with its merits.
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