You recently attended a job interview, but you have not heard back from the company about whether you got the job or not. Write a letter to the HR department. In your letter • describe the position you were interviewed for • explain why you think the interview was successful • say why you need to know if you've got the job or not.

Dear Mr. George, I hope everything is going great. I am writing
this
letter to get feedback about the
interview
which I attended two weeks ago, exactly on 25th June 2024 with
Chef
Kunla. On 20th June I saw several openings on your website and I have applied for a Junior Sous
Chef
position at JW Marriott Camelback Inn, Phoenix, Arizona.
The next step is
the
interview
process, I got a call to attend the
further
process. I have been interviewed by
Chef
Kunal, Executive
Chef
, Marriott International. The conversation lasted for 30 minutes, and most of the questions were asked to test my situation-handling skills. Some of the questions were asked technically. In
this
interview
process, I felt that I was one of the top candidates as per my qualifications and experience.
Also
, I have all the qualities and requirements that a person needs for
this
position.
Moreover
,
Chef
Kunal was impressed by my
interview
. So, kindly let me know if I have been selected for the position which I applied for. I have
also
applied for other properties and got positive feedback within a week and I am eagerly waiting for your response as I admire your property compared to your competitors. Thank you and looking forward to positive feedback. Yours Sincerely, Sathish Raghumani
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Coherence and Cohesion
There should be clear sectioning with single ideas within each paragraph to improve clarity.
Task Achievement
Be concise and precise while explaining why you need to know if you've got the job or not.
Coherence and Cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate and polite, reflecting formal correspondence effectively.
Task Achievement
The letter provides a comprehensive response, describing the position, explaining why the interview was successful, and why you need the response.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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