Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that the school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give own opinion

Being a profitable member of each
society
in life time makes everyone self-satisfy. The means of
this
satisfaction should be taught,
however
, the problem is who is responsible for
this
, parents or schools? In the scope of
this
essay, it is
tried
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trying
to discuss the both
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to discuss both the
views and depict
positive and negative point
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the positive and negative point
of each one. From the birthday to commencing the elementary
school
, parents are the main source of gaining information for each child. An infant learns how to demand the needs by the
first
days and
this
is the start of
learning process
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the learning process
. As he or she learns
basics
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the basics
, parents able to teach them communication with others. These basics are the fundamentals of future
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
in the
society
. Children should be taught how to take positive action in the family and can implement it in bigger areas. The positive point is that these trainings are the foundation which are taught by the most compassionate persons in our life.
Although
, the bad way of teaching by untrained parents can be harmful for both
child
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children
and
society
.
This
seven-year of non-academic learnings, teaches the most important basic learnings.
On the other hand
, children grow and after some years they begin learning in the schools.
From
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For
now, most of their lives spend in the schools and the process of socialization starts. For about 12 years they learn how to live their lives in
society
from the
school
,
thus
,
this
area is more important from now for them to teach how to be good. Bad friends, careless teacher, and
patents
a father or mother; one who begets or one who gives birth to or nurtures and raises a child; a relative who plays the role of guardian
parents
who do not follow the growing procedure of their children cause lack of sound training. In the idea of the people who agree
on
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with
the
second
opinion teachers should follow their students, knowing their friends, and reporting to their parents and interaction between
school
and house become more important while the
school
plays
more important role
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a more important role
. I believe that, considering the time each of us spend in our schools,
this
period is more important to show the best performance in
society
in the future. Parents should permanently be in touch with teachers, albeit, teacher are who influence us more. All
to
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in
all, parents play the most important role to be good in our childhood, but after that,
school
and teachers take the role and by the much longer period of time, their impressions are more important to make a man good for
future
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the future
of
society
.
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