The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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In future, the average standard of well-being of people is expected to be worsened than

present

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the present

. I absolutely disagree with the statement, because advancement in medical sciences and increased

education level lead

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the education level lead

to cure and prevention respectively.

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, progression in

health sciences

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the health sciences

has controlled the morbidity and mortality by many folds. Compared to past, when even small

disease

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caused prolonged illness or death, nowadays every

disease

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can be cured.

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is because of evidence based research and contemporary practices in surgery and medical treatment. The research and development in medical will enhance

further

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, and patients will be treated with much more ease without any significant side effects.

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, the drug used in chemotherapy for cancer patients has less side effects as compared to past and patients become healthy without compromising their hairs and immune system.

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, big diseases are being cured with much more ease as compared to

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the past

and in

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the future

the situation will become better.

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Secondarily

, the general

awareness

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and education about the cause and spread of diseases is being enhanced day by day. Due to

awareness

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campaigns, advancement in technology print and social media, people now are much aware about prevention from diseases. As a

results

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result

, population care about their hygiene and surroundings due to which

disease

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did not

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the income or profit arising from such transactions as the sale of land or other property

took

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the

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place and

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do not spread if it occurs.

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, In Pakistan, parents were reluctant to let their children take polio drops, but due to

awareness

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on Television, the number of parents taking their children for polio drops

has increased

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have increased

by leaps and bounds.

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, in coming years more and more people will know about different diseases, which will prevent any

disease

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to occur and spread. To conclude, the consideration that general health indicators will get

worsen

(comparative of 'bad') inferior to another in quality or condition or desirability

worse

future

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the future

does not hold significance.

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essay discussed that because of an increased

awareness

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about the diseases among

masses

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the masses

and research in

health sciences

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the health sciences

has led to

stoppage

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the stoppage

disease

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to occur at

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place and make its treatment much

easy

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easier

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Topic Vocabulary:

1. Standard of health
2. Average
3. Lower
4. Future
5. Aging population
6. Chronic diseases
7. Sedentary lifestyle
8. Lack of exercise
9. Poor dietary habits
10. Environmental pollution
11. Technological advancements
12. Impact on health

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