Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.
There is an
ever increasing
use of Add a hyphen
ever-increasing
technology
, such
as tablets and laptops, in the classroom. It is often argued that this
is a positive development, whilst others disagree and think it will lead to adverse ramifications. This
essay agrees that an increase in technology
is beneficial to students
and teachers. This
essay will discuss both points of view.
It is clear that
the internet has provided students
with access to more information than ever before. Moreover
, learners have the ability to research and learn about any subject at the touch of a button. It is therefore
agreed that technology
is a very worthwhile tool for education. Wikipedia is a prime example, where students
can simply type in any keyword and gain access to in-depth knowledge quickly and easily.
However
, many disagree and feel that technology
deprives people
of real human interaction
. Human interaction
teaches people
valuable skills such
as discourse, debate and empathy. Despite this
, human interaction
is still possible through the internet and this
essay disagrees technology
should be dismissed for
this
reason. For instance
, Skype and Facebook make it possible for people
to interact in ways that were never before possible.
In conclusion, while
the benefits of technology
, particularly the internet, allow students
to tap in to
limitless sources of information, some still feel that Join the words
into
people
should be wary of this
new phenomenon and not allow it to curb face to face
Add a hyphen
face-to-face
interaction
. However
, as long as we are careful to keep in mind the importance of human interaction
in education, the educational benefits are clearly positive.Submitted by splitterr on
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