One Of Your Friends Recently Had A Birthday Celebration, But You Missed It And You Forgot To Tell Your Friend That You Couldn’t Attend. Write A Letter To Your Friend. In Your Letter: – Explain Why You Missed It – Explain Why You Didn’t Tell Your Friend – And Say What You Would Like To Do To Show That You Are Sorry
Dear Tim,
Congratulations on completing another year on
this
planet! I really appreciate the invite to your birthday celebration party
and I bet the party
yesterday was a lot of fun, especially since it was for you. I apologise for not being able to make it because I had to take my mom to the emergency room after she slipped and fell in the bathroom in the evening.
I was at the hospital all night and by the time I got home after the hospital cleared her for discharge, it was 1AM and I was exhausted. I forgot to tell you since
the Correct word choice
that
party
completely slipped my mind as I was overwhelmed with stress regarding my mom's well-being.
I want to make it up to you for missing the party
yesterday and would like to take you out for drinks this
weekend! If you like, we can invite the whole crew, go bar hopping on Grove Street and have a blast!
Let me know if the plan works for you and I will invite the rest of the gang.
Your's faithfully
,
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task achievement
The explanation of why you missed the party is clear and detailed. However, you might want to include a brief mention of why this situation was unusual to emphasize the unexpected nature of the emergency.
coherence cohesion
In the future, consider briefly summarizing your main points in the conclusion to reinforce the message you're conveying.
task achievement
Friendly and apologetic tone is suitable for the context.
coherence cohesion
The structure is logical, with each paragraph addressing a specific aspect of the task.
coherence cohesion
Clear opening and closing, making the letter feel complete and well-rounded.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,